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Dracynna and Duuk

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My OC Dracynna, a teenage human girl raised by Raptors on a post-apocalyptic earth, and Duuk, an easygoing hedonistic Triceratops.

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Image size
3602x2660px 6.72 MB
Make
samsung
Model
SM-N920V
Shutter Speed
1000/10000 second
Aperture
F/1.9
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
320
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Let me start by saying that the purportions are good. It does indeed look like you payed attention to texture as well. Now for one of my major problems that I have with this work, I know you wanted it to look messy however this drawing is very hard to look at. It distracts the viewers very much. My suggestion for the texture thing is just to make it neater in general. My second problem with this work is the fact that the marks on the tree don't go well with perspective, so instead of making them straight diagonals I recommend you curved them, based on point of view. Lastly, in works like this I believe you should add shadowing.
Well, I hope this helps!